Thread:EmeraldTulip/@comment-7180588-20160918025723/@comment-27044567-20160918040655

If I'm being totally honest? I thought it was well-written, and while I normally hate script format, you made it work. And that's hard to do, so congratulations!

The only thing is that some of the events that happened... I honestly wasn't really a fan of. Like, Chase getting superpowers? Not really my thing. Bionic Skylar? Not really my thing. Oliver pushing Chase out of the way to win Skylar's affections? Not really my thing. Bree being effectively absent? Not really my thing. But it was undoubtedly well-written, so I commend you for that.